Exercises relating to Improvement of sentences
(Based on latest changed style used in SBI 2017 Preliminary
Exam.)
Question : In the following questions, a part
of the given sentence is in bold italics. Below the sentence are given
alternatives to the italicized part as (A), (B) and (C) which may improve the
sentence. Choose the correct option as answer. If no improvement is required
mark your answer as (D).
ONE
1. The traveller asked the old man where does that road led to.
(A) where did that road lead to.
(B) where that road led to.
(C) where that road leads to.
(D) No improvement required.
2. It is beyond one’s guess who the team will elect captain.
(A) who will the team
(B) whom will the team
(C) whom the team will
(D) No improvement required.
3. The
boss as well as all the staff members of the office are worried about the bad
performance of the company this year.
(A) are worried over the bad performance
(B) are worried for the bad performance
(C) is worried about the bad performance
(D) No improvement required.
4. All
the students were working very hard for the last so many months to
clear the examination but all went in vain.
(A) All the students were toiling hard.
(B) The all
students were working hard.
(C) All the
students had been working very hard.
(D) No
improvement required.
5. The only
son of the old man played ducks and drakes with his wealth and ruined his future.
(A) played ducks and drakes of his wealth
(B) played
bucks and ducks with his wealth.
(C) played
ducks and does with his wealth.
(D) No
improvement required.
6. The host kept
all the guests wait for a long time before he served them with food.
(A) kept all
the guests waited for a long time.
(B) did keep
the guests wait for a long time.
(C) kept all
the guests waiting for a long time.
(D) No
improvement required.
7. Hardly had
the child seen his mother than he started to weep.
(A) than he
started weeping.
(B) when he
started to weep.
(C) when he
started weeping.
(D) No
improvement required.
8. Had he paid
his dues in time, he had been allowed to appear in the examination.
(A) he would
have been allowed to appear.
(B) he had
allowed to appear in the examination.
(C) he would
be allowed to appear in the examination.
(D) No
improvement required.
9. The
person who you met in the market yesterday, is my friend.
(A) The person with whom you met.
(B) The person
whom you met.
(C) The person
who had met you.
(D) No
improvement required.
10. None
of them are so intelligent and capable to impart knowledge to the
candidates.
(A) Neither of
them are so intelligent and capable
(B) None of
them is so intelligent and capable.
(C) None of
they is so intelligent and capable.
(D) No
improvement required.
(ANSWERS)
1. B
The word
’asked’ indicates that the activity
relates to the past and the sentence should be in past tense.”Does’ is
incorrect. The sentence ends with a full stop. It is a simple assertive
sentence and not an interrogative sentence. So formation of the sentence should
be accordingly in simple form. Past tense of lead(does+lead) = led. “where that
road led to.”
2.C
This sentence ends with full stop. It is a
simple sentence. Here error is due to subject or object form to be used in the
sentence. Take an example by substituting a word in place of ‘who’. The team
elected ‘him’ captain. ‘Him’ is in object case so the word to be used in its
place will be in object case. ‘Who’ is in subject case and ‘whom’ is object
case.”whom the team will elect
captain”.
3.C
When two nouns
or pronouns are joined by ‘as well as’ verb relating to the former is used i.e.
verb relating to ‘the boss’ = is .The boss as wellas all the staf members is….
4.C
The sentence
depicts duration of period of performing an activity with the words ‘for the
last so many months” It is of Past Perfect continuous tense. So instead of
‘were’ should be ‘had been’.
5.A
It is an idiom
to play ‘ducks and drakes of’ meaning to spoil or to destroy.
6.C
‘To keep one
waiting’ means to force one to wait.
7.C
Hardly is
followed by ‘when’ and participle is used. When he started weeping.
8.A
This is a
condition sentence. Both the actions are imaginary and are supposed to have
happened in the past. First is in past perfect tense and second should be with
‘would have + third form of verb.’he would have been allowed to’.
9.B
Here error is due to use of subject or object
form. Who is in subject and whom is in object form.Check it by changing word in
place of ‘who’. It will be … You met ‘him’ and not ‘he’ and ‘whom’ and not
‘who’ So it will be “The person whom I met”
10.B None is
singular in form. It will be followed by singular verb. None…..is
TWO
1. All
the members of my family were living in our ancestral house in the
village since my childhood.
(A) All the
members of my family was living.
(B) All the
members of my family lived.
(C) All the
members of my family had been living.
(D) No
improvement required
2. Drinking
and to smoke has made an adverse effect on the health of the old man.
(A)Drinking
and smoking has made.
(B) Drink and
smoke have made.
(C) Drinking
and smoking have made.
(D) No
improvement required.
3. Neither
she nor her sister were ready to participate in the competition.
(A) Neither
she or her sister were ready.
(B) Neither
she nor her sister was ready.
(C) Neither
she or her sister was ready.
(D) No
improvement required
4. Unless
the culprit does not apologise, the
authorities will not forgive him.
(A) Unless the
culprit do not apologise.
(B) Unless the
culprit not apologises.
(C) Unless the
culprit apologises.
(D) No
improvement required
5. If his
father had enough money he would have purchased a spacious
house for him.
(A) he had
purchased.
(B) he would
purchase.
(C) he would
had purchased.
(D) No
improvement required.
6. I shall
have accomplished my work before my friends will reach my house.
(A) my friends
reached my house.
(B) my friends
would reached my house.
(C) my friends
reach my house.
(D) No
improvement required.
7. Before the
mother finished narrating her story, the child was already slept.
(A) the child
already slept.
(B) the child already would slept.
(C) the child
had already slept.
(D) No
improvement required.
8. Where the
saint was born, when he was born and how
he lived are all a mystery.
(A) all are a
mystery.
(B) all is a
mystery.
(C) is all a
mystery.
(D) No
improvement required.
9. The captain
along with all the members of his team enjoyed in
the farm house yesterday.
(A) his team
members enjoyed.
(B) the team
members enjoyed.
(C) the
members of his team enjoyed themselves.
(D) No
improvement required.
10. Both
the sisters take after each other so much that it is difficult for
one to distinguish between the two.
(A) Both the
sisters look after each other
(B) The both
sisters appear for each other.
(C) Both the
sisters make after each other.
(D) No
improvement required.
(ANSWERS)
1. C
This sentence
relates to Past Perfect Continuous Tense as it shows duration of activities
through words …’since my child hood’. So instead of ‘were’ there should be ‘had
been’.
2.C
Both the
activities are to be expressed in the same manner. Drinking and smoking. For
these two plural verb is to be used.
Drinking and
smoking have ……
3.B
Neither is a
singular word, therefore a singular verb is used.
4.C
Unless itself includes negative meaning so not
is superfluous to be used with it.”Unless the culprit apologises..”
5.D .
Both the
activities in this sentence are imaginary to have happened in the past.It is
not sure whether they will ever happen
or not. In first case past tense will be used and in second case ‘would have +
III form of verb is used.
6.C
In this
sentence both activities are imaginary and are to happen in future. In such
cases, for earlier activity ’future perfect tense’ is used and in other simple
present tense is used i.e.1. Shall+have+ III form of verb and 2. First form of
verb.
7.C
There are two
activities one after the other relating to past time. These have already happened in the past. In
one part Past indefinite tense is used whereas for activity prior to that past
perfect tense is used i.e. ‘finished’ and ‘had slept’.
8.C
All the three
parts of the sentence show a single activity relating to one person. So for
these a single verb will be used.
9.C
Words like
‘enjoy’ or ‘avail’ are always followed by reflexive pronouns like myself,
himself herself or yourselves etc.
10.D
‘To take
after’ is an idiom meaning ‘to look alike’.
THREE
1.Today in the morning when I reached the
bus stand, I discovered that I had missed my usual bus therefore I reached my office on
time.
(A)
consequently I reached my office on time.
(B) however I
reached my office on time.
(C) moreover I
reached my office on time.
(D) No
improvement required.
2. All the
persons standing in the crowd could not know that where the pick pocket went.
(A) that where
the pick pocket had gone.
(B) where the
pick pocket had gone.
(C) where the
pick pocket was gone.
(D) No
improvement required.
3. As it was
already dark all around, the travellers were left with no other choice but
to halt their journey.
(A) but to put
halt of their journey.
(B) than to
halt their journey.
(C) except to
put halt of their journey.
(D) No
improvement required.
4. As the
young lady was travelling with a forged passport therefore her passport impounded
by the authorities.
(A) her
passport was impounded by the authorities.
(B) therefore
her passport got impounded by the authorities.
(C)
consequently her passport got impounded by the authorities.
(D) No
improvement required.
5. The boy did
not attempt the examination fairly eventually he is not likely of being
successful.
(A)
consequently he is not likely of successful.
(B) therefore
he is not likely to be successful.
(C) so that he
is not likely to be successful.
(D) No improvement required.
6. The team
elected him captain than whom no better person could be found.
(A) than who a
better person could be found.
(B) except who
a better person could be found.
(C) but whom a
better person was found.
(D) No
improvement required.
7. Having
paid his fine, the principal allowed his brother to attend the college.
(A) Being paid
his fine.
(B) After
paying his fine.
(C) After he
paid his fine.
(D) No
improvement required.
8. Come what
may, we extend our full support to him in
this hour of need.
(A) we have
extended our full support to him.
(B) we must
extend our full support to him.
(C) we might
extend our full support to him.
(D) No
improvement required.
9. It
was hardly impossible for me to resist myself from taking so delicious
food.
(A) Hardly it
was impossible for me.
(B) Hardly it was possible for me.
(C) It was
hardly possible for me.
(D) No
improvement required.
10. Physical
activities and light exercise can be helpful in preventing us against
stress caused by pressures of modern busy life.
(A) can be
helpful to preventing us from stress.
(B) can be
helpful in preventing us from stress.
(C) can be
helpful for preventing us against stress.
(D) No
improvement required.
(ANSWERS)
1. B
‘Therefore’ is used to show result of an
activity, In this case inspite of one activity the subsequent activity
happened. So a word expressing such an action followed by another should be
used. Out of the given words however is the correct word.
2.B
Along with the
words like ‘Where, why,‘ etc. that is not used. As the activity happened in the
past, words ‘had gone’ are correct.
3.B
‘ No other’ is
always followed by ‘than’ and not by ‘but or except’.
4.A
‘As’ and
‘therefore’ both words have the same meaning. So ‘therefore’ is superfluous
here.
5.B
There are two activities one followed by the other. The
second one is the result of the former one. ‘therefore is the correct word.
6.D
The sentence
is correct.
7.C
The given
sentence gives an impression that the principal gave the fine and allowed which
is incorrect. The correct sentenceis ‘Afterhe paid the fine, he was allowed…..
8.B
‘Come what
may’ means ‘whatever may happen and under all circumstances’ It shows that
activity will be done in future time. So past tense is incorrect.
9.C
‘Hardly’
itself means ‘not’. So impossible is incorrect. A positive adverb ‘possible’ is
correct.
10.B
Verb ‘prevent’
is followed by preposition ‘from’ instead of against.
FOUR
1. Taken
all the circumstances into consideration, the authorities have decided
to sack all the striking employees from service.
(A) Taking all
the circumstances into consideration.
(B)
Considering into all the circumstances.
(C) Taken all
the circumstances for considering.
(D) No
improvement required.
2. The
inspecting official during the inquiry found both the employees neglect his duty.
(A) found both
of the employees neglect his duty.
(B) found both
the employees negligent in their duties
(C) found both
the employees negligence in their duties.
(D) No improvement required.
3. Those
people who do not avail of the available opportunity always lag behind
in the life.
(A) which do
not avail of the available opportunity
(B) who does
not avail of the available opportunity
(C) who do not
avail themselves of the available opportunity.
(D) No
improvement required.
4. The
organizers have not yet decided the venue where the prize distribution ceremony going
to be held tomorrow.
(A) where
the prize distribution ceremony is going to be held tomorrow.
(B) where
the prize distribution ceremony held tomorrow.
(C) which the
prize distribution ceremony is going to be held tomorrow.
(D) No
improvement required.
5. Both the
sisters are very intelligent but the elder sister is the best of the two in
her studies.
(A) but the
elder sister is better of the two in her
studies.
(B) but the
older sister is the best of the two in her studies.
(C) but the
eldest sister is the best of the two in her studies.
(D) No
improvement required.
6. The
accident would have been averted, had
the driver driven the bus with carefully.
(A) the driver
had driven the bus with care.
(B) if the
driver had driven the bus with care.
(C) if the
driver drove the bus carefully.
(D) No
improvement required.
7. The
authorities have decided to impart necessary training to all the staff members about
security measures avoiding cyber attacks.
(A) about
security measures preventing cyber attacks.
(B) about
security measures to check cyber attacks.
(C) about
security measures exercising cyber attacks.
(D) No
improvement required.
8. The
dignitary who the committee invited to preside over the function has
shown his inability to be present on the occasion.
(A) The
dignitary which the committee invited to preside over the function.
(B) The
dignitary whom the committee invited to preside over the function.
(C) The
dignitary to whom the committee invited to preside over the function.
(D) No
improvement required.
9. The manager
has lost confidence of all the committee members because when he says nobody is ready to
believe.
(A) when he
says none is ready to believe.
(B) when he
says nobody is ready to believe in.
(C) what he
says nobody is ready to believe.
(D) No
improvement required.
10. What
does worry me is his falling in a bad company.
(A) What
worries me.
(B) That
worries me.
(C) What has worry
me.
(D) No
improvement required.
(ANSWERS)
1. A
As the main
activity is to take place in time to come ‘taken’ is incorrect here. It means
that act has already been done.So ‘taking’ is the correct word.
2.B
The verb
‘found’ shows that the act relates to past time. Adjective ‘negligent’
qualifying the nouns ‘both the employees’ is correct word here.
3.C
Verbs
like enjoy or avail are followed by
reflexive pronouns like myself, yourself or themselves etc. For noun ‘the
people’ pronoun ‘themselves’ will be used.
4.A
Here helping
verb ‘is’ is missing. To make it correct add ‘is’ before verb ‘going’.
5.A
While
comparing two things a comparative degree is used. So instead of ‘best’
‘better’ is correct here.
6.B
‘With’ is
superfluous here. Only adverb ‘carefully’ is sufficient here.
7.B
“Avoiding’
gives impression of related to verb ‘impart’ whereas here a word showing subsequent
action is required. ‘ To check’ is the correct word here.
8.B
To understand
it properly consider the sentence in its original form. “The committee invited
the dignitary”, here dignitary is in object case. As the noun ‘dignitary’ here
is in object case, to qualify it object case ‘whom’ instead of subject case
‘who’ is required.
9.C
‘When’
pertains to time whereas ‘what’ relating to contents of the matter is required
here.’What he says’ is correct.
10.A
‘Does worry’
gives impression that it is an interrogative
sentence but the sentence is simple assertive sentence and it ends with a full
stop. So ‘What worries me’ is correct.
FIVE
1. The
tourists visiting this place often ask the guide where does the river the Ganges
come from.
(A) from where does the river the Ganges
come.
(B) that where the river the Ganges come
from.
(C)
where the river the Ganges comes from.
(D) No
improvement required.
2. Shakespeare
as a playwright has a distinction that character of his plays is imbued in
trait of love, hatred, ambition, jealousy and compassion as found in
normal human beings of the world.
(A) that character of his plays is imbued by
traits of love, hatred, ambition, jealousy and compassion
(B) that
characters of his plays are imbued in trait of love, hatred, ambition, jealousy
and compassion.
(C) that characters of his plays are imbued with
traits of love, hatred, ambition, jealousy and compassion
(D) No
improvement required.
3. The company
has employed two young engineers to supervise the keep up and maintenance of
the machinery of the factory.
(A) to look
after the keep up and maintenance of the machinery of the factory.
(B) to look
into the keep up and maintenance of the machinery of the factory.
(C) to supervise the up-keep and maintenance of
the machinery of the factory.
(D) No
improvement required.
4. It is
unlikely that the young man will take rest for a little even until
he does not get a suitable job.
(A) until
he will not get a suitable job.
(B) until he will
get a suitable job.
(C) until he
gets a suitable job.
(D) No
improvement required.
5. Arrogance
in manners, rudeness in behavior and harshness in language is the manifestation of his
personality.
(A) are the
manifestations of his personality.
(B) is the
manifestations of his personality.
(C) is the
manifestation to his personality.
(D) No improvement required.
6.On hearing
the news of success of his son in the examination, the old father felt elated and was
besides with joy.
(A) the old
father felt elated and besides with joy.
(B) the old
father felt elated and was beside with joy.
(C) the old father felt elated and was beside
himself with joy.
(D) No
improvement required.
7. Technology
and globalization have greatly obviated the need for labour rendering many Americans
superfluous and relegating them from
the middle to lower class.
(A) the need for labour render many Americans superfluous and relegate
them
(B) the need from labour rendering many Americans superfluous and
relegating them
(C) the need for labour rendering many Americans superfluous and
relegate them.
(D) No improvement required.
8. The old man
used to visit the place where he resided in the past for many years and sat
for hours brooding over the days gone away.
(A) sat for
hours brooding over the days gone off.
(B) sat for hours brooding over the days gone by.
(C) sat for
hours brooding on the days gone by.
(D) No
improvement required.
9. The young
boy appeared in the examination again and again as long as he qualified it.
(A) the
examination again and again as long as he was qualified.
(B) in the
examination again and again until he qualified it.
(C) in the
examination again and again until he was qualified in it.
(D) No
improvement required.
10. A few students of my class is not as intelligent as me but
more intelligent than me.
(A) are not as
intelligent as me but more intelligent than me.
(B) are not as
intelligent but more intelligent than
me.
(C) are not as
intelligent as I but more intelligent than I.
(D) No
improvement required.
(ANSWERS)
1. C
A helping verb
before the main verb gives impression of an interrogative sentence which is not
correct in this case. It is an assertive simple sentence.So main sentence and A
option are incorrect. The noun the Ganges is singular so it should be followed
by singular verb. B is also not correct. C is the correct option.
2. C
Plays have
more than one characters, so it should be ‘characters’ instead of character and
‘are’ instead of ‘is’. Main sentence and (A) are incorrect. Imbued is followed
by preposition ‘with’ instead of ‘in’. B too is incorrect.
3. C
‘To keep up’
means ‘to maintain a certain level or speed’. But ‘upkeep’ means ‘to maintain a
thing in a working order’. So ‘upkeep’ is the correct word.
4. C
In such cases
first sentence is in future tense and the second sentence is in present tense.
So ‘gets’ instead of ‘will get’ is correct. Until itself means negative, so not
is superfluous.
5. Both
qualities relate to one person so it is treated as singular. The sentence is
correct.
6. C
Words like
enjoy, avail or beside are always followed by a reflexive pronoun. ‘The old
father’ is third person singular. Its reflexive pronoun s ‘himself’. So ‘beside himself with joy’is correct.
7. D
Sentence is
correct.
8. B
‘Brooding’ is followed by preposition ‘over’. ‘Gone by’ means
something relating to past time.
9. B
‘Again and
again’ means repeatedly. ‘As long as’ means two actions going on
simultaneously. But here the required word is ‘up to a certain time’ so ‘until’
is the correct word.
10. C
‘A few students’ is a plural noun. It should be followed by
plural verb ‘are’ instead of ‘is’ Further ‘I’ is required instead of ‘me’. For further
clarification on this point consider … He is stronger than I (am)
and not me (am).